Friday, July 31, 2015

1256: Everything She Said Could've Just Been Done With a Sign

Why does the waitress have to go "Good news and bad news"? Just charge him for the cream and sugar and don't say anything. 95% percent of people won't even notice the increase in price and most won't care. "But she's telling him about the price increase like a good business owner should!" you scream at me. Businesses change their prices all the time without any explanation and the only hint of the change you may see is a sign that reads 'Cream & sugar .50c'.

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