Showing posts with label Vagabond Girl. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Vagabond Girl. Show all posts

Wednesday, June 10, 2015

Liberty #51: Vagabond Girl

Katie awoke on a bus bench and slowly sat up, squeezing the bridge of her nose and keeping her eyes shut tight. Her eyes snapped open and she looked around. She reached an arm around to scratch her other arm, pressing it against her chest. In surprise, she squeezed both her breasts quickly. “They stole my bra,” she sighed. She rested her face in her hands for a couple of seconds before getting up and walking away. She shifted in her jeans a couple of times then reached behind her to rub her ass. “And they stole my underwear.”




“Where have you been?” Katie heard as she walked into the apartment she shared with Michelle. Katie continued walking past the kitchen where Michelle was and down the hallway to her bedroom. “Katie, where have you been?” Michelle asked again as she followed Katie down the hallway. Katie grabbed a bra off of her bedroom floor and removed her shirt, putting the bra on with her back to Michelle.

She went over the night in her head, the two guys, possibly being drugged, more than likely raped and then being left on a bus bench. “I met a couple of guys last night,” she smiled.

“A couple? I didn’t think you were that kind of girl,” Michelle smiled back at Katie. “Look, Katie, do you have any money for rent?”

“No. I get paid at the end of the week so I can probably get something to you this weekend,” Katie answered.

“Where does your money go? You don’t have a car, you don’t have any bills, you rarely even go out except for getting a few drinks and apparently getting double-teamed by a couple of guys. Where’s your money?”

“Can you chastise me later? I have to get to work,” Katie sighed, tired of these financial talks Michelle subjected her to.

“I have work, too, Katie. I can’t support this apartment by myself. I have a friend who is looking for a place to stay and I’m thinking of letting him stay here.”

“Here? Where?”

“He’d get your room, you’d move to the couch.”

“I’ll give you some money on Friday,” Katie said.

“I let you stay here to ease the burden on me having to pay for everything,” Michelle began. “I also didn’t like that your last roommates basically advocated for your rape every weekend but you have to start being more responsible.”

Katie nodded because it was really the only thing she could do.




As Katie reorganized shoe boxes on the shelves, swept the floor and assisted customers in the shoe department, she thought about where her money went because she was confused by that too. She paid half the rent, bought her own groceries, gave $100 a paycheck for utilities so she should have about $400 left over at the end of the month. Take out the few drinks at the bar and her weed she should still have about $300. But she usually barely had $20 to her name.

“Hi, Katie,” a young man said, smiling and walking down the aisle toward her carrying a basket.

“Hi, Josh. Shouldn’t you be asleep?”

“No. I grabbed some breakfast then decided to grab some essentials,” he lifted the basket up. “Also, just between us, I’m stalking an employee.”

Katie nodded. “I see. Is it Bob in sporting goods?”

“It is. Honestly, I wanted to see if you got to work. Michelle texted me earlier this morning saying you didn’t come home.”

“Were you worried about me?” Katie blushed.

“Maybe. A little. Ever since I walked in on you being raped a few months ago I’ve just wanted to keep my arms wrapped around you and protect you. But that’s stupid. You just need to find a decent guy who doesn’t want to get you pregnant just so you’ll be stuck with him forever and slam your head into a wall.”

“Based on my experience, easier said than done,” Katie said. “Will we be seeing you this weekend?”

“Definitely. Michelle invited me to stay all next week so I’ll probably come over after work on Friday. We’ll be seeing a lot of each other.”

“Cool. Why don’t you just move in? We’d all save some money,” Katie suggested.

“I still have a few months on my lease. Also, I don’t know how committed either of us to our relationship so moving in might not be such a good idea.”

“Are you two going to break up?” Katie asked, trying not to sound enthusiastic.

“Probably. Some day. We still care about and love each other but our relationship over the last couple of months has felt a bit off. .”

“You’re probably just a bad boyfriend,” Katie said.

“Yeah, that’s probably what it is. But do me a favor and don’t tell Bob, okay?”

“Your secret is safe with me,” Katie replied and giggled. Josh waved to her as he walked away.


1212: Something Something Golf

A couple weeks ago on Twitter, I posed a question asking if it was possible to stay off the grid. I asked this because it was a major plot point in this story I was writing. I was mainly asking if it was believable but also based on fact.

I knew this girl from almost ten years ago and she has a very small social footprint online. She has a Facebook, she has a MySpace and I'm pretty sure she has LinkedIn but doing a Google search on her turns up very little information. From what I can tell, she is also very rarely online so unless you have the means to contact her or want to wait for a response from her limited social media, there is no way you can get a hold of her. This is a very important plot point in "Vagabond Girl", a story that will be posting later today in Liberty #51.

I started writing "Vagabond Girl" because this girl who was talented, smart, funny and attractive but could never get a leg up in anything and neither my girlfriend at the time or myself could really see how it happened. She was always just a victim of circumstance it seemed. I also wanted to showcase the deplorable living standards this girl was subjected to due to being forced to move around all the time.

Instead of detailing, like I wanted to, a whole decade of this life, I chose to focus on just roughly one week but a lot happens in that week and it was the first story since "Riley & Tyler" that I really enjoyed doing. I need to do more stories like that, I know, but I also need to get the bad stories written too or they fester in my head.

"Vagabond Girl" is about Katie, a girl who works a minimum wage job and lives with her best friend, Michelle, who treats her like a child. Michelle threatens to bring in another roommate unless Katie can get her act together all the while Katie is getting closer with Michelle's boyfriend, Josh.

Liberty #51 posts at 2:00 CST.

Why is Gladys at the door? Didn't Brutus take his keys with him? Brutus just got back from playing golf so we can safely assume his arms still work. Does The Born Loser exist in some strange time anomaly where women wait dutifully by the door because they don't know what to do when their husband is gone and all the housework is done?